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April 12, 2015 keii4ii 5 Comments

Note-chan: “Sempai noticed me at last!”

Was it a little underwhelming? Perhaps the next chapter will make it all better. :)

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This is some beautiful artwork. I love the luminescent whispy fish, who I am sure probably have a proper name I have yet to discover. I do have a hard time understanding the rocky outcropping that I think Ethan? is standing on, because the outcropping seems very flat and arch-like, but the angle he is standing at does not necessarily make sense to the structure, unless the rocky outcropping is actually flat with a circle carved out of it. The rocks just feel vertically stacked is all.

Otherwise, lovely page. Intrigued by the concept.

How weird, this comment was supposed to show up on the first page of the archive. :(

Sorry about that! I think my anti-spam plugin was acting up. I just updated it and posted a test comment (which I have deleted), and it seems to be working fine now.

There are some beautiful panels on this page, (http://www.heartofkeol.com/eng/001-01/), but I don’t know if the doll-like features of the man necessarily work to my taste. But that’s just a personal preference. Your more “splashy” panels show some great design ideas.

Fantastic lighting on this page, (http://www.heartofkeol.com/eng/001-02/) it really helps set the moods of the two different scenes. I also enjoyed the dramatic burst of wind surrounding the appearance of this little girl.